杨科，容貌美丽，身高一米七二，成绩非常优秀，是全校闻名的学霸，而且还有另一个不为人知的身份：xxx。因为是国家一级机密，所以不能告诉别人。她继承同为科学家的父母的遗志，从小接受非人的体能、智力训练，缺乏和同龄人交流的能力。
想着想着，蓉蓉流下了伤心的泪水：“没想到你的过去是这样的……对不起，我会竭尽所能许你一个幸福的未来！看着我坚定的眼睛！”
杨科：“让我看这双左眼4.6，右眼4.8的眼睛有什么事？”
营造的感人气氛瞬间破灭：“……”
“我父母还健在，都不是科学家，从小没有接受非人的体能和智力训练，和同龄人交流的能力也还可以吧。”杨科说到最后一点的时候，表情有了微妙的变化，“我不是没有朋友的人。”
蓉蓉眨了眨眼睛。
“你是我的朋友，我承认。”
“你被我敏捷的才思、坚持的个性征服了吗？”
“因为在你发呆的时候可以把冰红茶的吸管□□你的鼻孔里。”杨科微笑起来，“很好玩。”
“……”蓉蓉举起了手，“老师，这里有一个问题少女。”
没有老师出现。
“咦？老师呢？”蓉蓉环顾四周，大吃一惊，“不仅是老师，其他人呢？怎么都不见了？难道……我们现在进入了学校里世界，即将探索发生在这所学校的成年秘事。1923年，学校由一个富商创立，投资上百万，然而，请来的包工头为了私吞很多的钱财，拖欠农民工的工资。愤怒的农民工将包工头叫到了学校新建的天台上……”
杨科道：“因为已经放学了，其他人都走了。”
“……为什么没有人早告诉我的！”
“一起回家吧。”
两个少女走在放学后空空荡荡的走廊里，不远处食堂传来的打闹声冲散了因空无一人带来的寂静氛围。
春天快要过去了，春天的花和夏天的草在楼下的花坛里茂盛地生长着。
“蓉蓉，我喜欢你。”
“啊？啊？我又在幻想了吗？冰红茶呢？”蓉蓉习惯性地伸手摸自己的鼻子，却没有摸到。
手被杨科拉住了。
“是现实。我喜欢你。”
“……”蓉蓉全身的血液都冲到了脸上。
这是一个阴谋，她想。
一切都太美好了。邻后座的冷傲学霸，因为莫名其妙的科幻原因和自己产生了关联，温馨友爱的校园日常，努力之后获得的进步和同步收获的爱情。
“刚才收到了一个月来最好的电磁波。”杨科看着表说道。
“啊？”
“今晚八点来我家。”
“啊？”
“我说，今晚八点来我家。你合格了。”
“什么合格？作为你的女朋友吗？”
“……作为超电磁炮发射员。”
“啊？”
“可以发射超电磁炮了。”
“啊？”
披着科幻皮行着日常之实的日子，到此为止。
某不科学的超电磁炮
In the cold and plain living room, Matt is sitting in his chair. His eyes don’t shine anymore. He looks extremely old and weak. Today is his birthday, and he is by himself. The only thing that he has been doing all day is thinking about how sad and lonely his life is. As he was looking at some old pictures, he found one special with him and his friends from college. This picture brought back the days when he had friends and his life was full of happiness. Also, it brought him a sad memory. This memory happened forty years ago, during his last year of college.
Throughout college, Matt had a friend named Mark. Mark was tall and skinny. He wore thick glasses. He was shy, smart and responsible. Also, Mark didn’t have as many friends as Matt had. He considered Matt as his best friend. As good friends, they knew everything about each other, and they hung out. Also, they overcame many problems together. They were really good friends.
On his twenty-fourth birthday their life changed. On the night before his birthday, Mark called Matt, “Hi! Matt,” his voice sounded strange. He continued, “ I have an important project to work on. I’m having some problem with this. Maybe, you could come over and help me with it giving me some new ideas. Could you” Matt asked, “What time” Mark kept in silence for a minute, and then he said, “At 8 p Is it good for you” Then Matt answered, “OK! See you later.” At that night, it was Matt’s birthday. So, he didn’t want to spend his birthday helping Mark with his project. Matt went to a club with some other guys.
The next morning, Matt noticed that Mark was acting differently. When he went to talk to Mark, Mark ignored him completely. He left the classroom without saying one word. As Mark was walking away, Matt said in an angry voice, “You are selfish. You are just thinking about yourself. I was having fun on my birthday. Why can’t you understand it”
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While he was saying it, Mallory, one of his classmates and friend, stood up and started to say, “How can you say such thing to Mark You don’t know what happened! Last night, he called you many times, but he didn’t get any answer from you. He worried about what was going wrong with you. He took his car and drove all night looking for you. He looked at the hospital, the jail, and bars ……” Matt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself, saying, “Why did he do it He could work on the project by himself, and ……” At that time Mallory spoke angrily, “Shut up! He had prepared a surprise birthday party for you, and we waited for you or for a call all night long.”
Tears fell from his eyes. Matt didn’t know what to say or what to do. Before he said anything, Mallory had left the classroo He sat down and stayed there for a long time. He looked around the classroo It was cold and plain without his friends. It was empty, just like his living room now.
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Steve, a twelve-year-old boy, was about to be lost forever , by the U.S. education syste Remarkably, he could read, yet, in spite of his reading skills, Steve was failing. He had been failing since first grade, as he was passed on from grade to grade. Steve was a big boy, looking more like a teenager than a twelve year old, yet, Steve went unnoticed…… until Miss White.
Miss White was a smiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn’t take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. He never did his homework, and he was always in trouble with Miss White. His heart would break under her sharp words, and when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, he did not study.
In the middle of the first semester of school, the entire seventh grade was tested for basic skills. Steve hurried through his tests, and continued to dream of other things, as the day wore on. His heart was not in school, but in the woods, where he often escaped alone, trying to shut out the sights, sounds and smells of his alcoholic home. No one checked on him to see if he was safe. No one knew he was gone, because no one was sober（清醒的） enough to care. Oddly, Steve never missed a day of school.
One day, Miss White’s impatient voice broke into his daydreams. “Steve!!” Startled, he turned to look at her.
“Pay attention!”
Steve locked his gaze on Miss White with adolescent adoration (青春期的爱慕), as she began to go over the test results for the seventh grade.
“You all did pretty well,” she told the class, “except for one boy, and it breaks my heart to tell you this, but……” She hesitated, pinning Steve to his seat with a sharp stare, her eyes searching his face.
“……The smartest boy in the seventh grade is failing my class!”
She just stared at Steve, as the class spun around for a good look. Steve dropped his eyes and carefully examined his fingertips.
After that, it was war!! Steve still wouldn’t do his homework. Even as the punishments became more severe, he remained stubborn.
“Just try it! ONE WEEK!” He was unmoved.
“You’re smart enough! You’ll see a change!” Nothing fazed hi
“Give yourself a chance! Don’t give up on your life!” Nothing.
“Steve! Please! I care about you!”
Wow! Suddenly, Steve got it!! Someone cared about him? Someone, totally unattainable and perfect, CARED ABOUT HIM??!!
Steve went home from school, thoughtful, that afternoon. Walking into the house, he took one look around. Both parents were passed out, in various stages of undress, and the stench(恶臭) was overpowering! He, quickly, gathered up his camping gear, a jar of peanut butter, a loaf of bread, a bottle of water, and this time……his schoolbooks. Grim faced and determined, he headed for the woods.
The following Monday he arrived at school on time, and he waited for Miss White to enter the classroo She walked in, all sparkle and smiles! God, she was beautiful! He yearned for her smile to turn on hi
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It did not.
Miss White, immediately, gave a quiz on the weekend homework. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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He discovered that he could understand and retain knowledge, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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原版（正经的）故事梗概：从前有一个十二岁的学渣名叫史蒂夫，他懒得学习更懒得做作业。尽管他身高很高（外表很显眼的意思），但仍然没人注意他。直到有一天……一个姓白的老师（怀特吧喂！）来到了他的班级。
那一天，史蒂夫感觉自己恋爱了。
……然而恋爱什么的并没有什么卵用，他依然是个怠惰的差生。有一次考试他考得异常之萎，引起了白老师（怀特老师啊喂！）的不满，于是白老师（这个梗你还要用几次啊！_(:з)∠）_）找他喝茶。不管怎么好说歹说都没有戳中史蒂夫的□□，但当她无意中说出自己很在乎史蒂夫的时候，史蒂夫的基佬之魂觉醒了（什么奇怪的东西混了进来！）。他决定洗心革面重新做人。毕竟他可是mc世界徒手碎大石的大佬啊，小僵尸小蜘蛛小白纷纷拜倒在他的短裤下，随便追求个初中女老师什么的根本不在话下。
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这样想着，她进入了梦乡。
……
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史蒂夫-星野 white-白默
极夜轨迹
一阵风从敞开着的窗户里吹进来，顺便拂过坐在后排窗边的星野的额发。散落下来，盖住一半眼睛的过长刘海被微微撩起，露出了她因过度疲劳而缺乏神采的双眼。
星野用手背抹了抹眼眶下的青黑，继续低下头作出认真听课的模样。
绵密的白云在仅能获得的一方视野中慢慢移动，渐渐遮住了阳光。
星野坐在教室的左后方，远离门靠窗的一边。正如位置暗示的那样，她是个不起眼的吊车尾学生，虽然成绩不佳，但好在行为安分，为人沉默，并不引起老师注意。
也正因如此，她的内心渐渐被惰性和孤独侵蚀，隐藏在一贯软弱内向的外表下的变化，连最亲近的父母都未曾觉察。
就这样，从高一开始，星野的成绩逐年下滑。
外人看到的是她貌似不变的努力，只有她知道，原本回家后认真看书的时间越来越少，取而代之的是以查资料为由，整夜整夜地玩游戏。书本上的内容已经无法在她的心中留下任何哪怕微弱的印象，花团锦簇的游戏世界成为了她的内心世界。
“星野，妈妈知道你一直很努力学习，这次没考好并不重要，只要你坚持下来，就一定能……”
“嗯。”
像每个对自己差强人意的成绩感到抱歉的女儿一样，星野低下头，挡住因熬夜玩游戏而微微发红的眼圈。
对于每个吊车尾学生，有这样善解人意的家长，不仅不会在自己考砸的时候破口大骂或是冷漠以待，还反过来理解自己、安慰自己，应该都是值得高兴的事吧。
可是，她知道这不是自己想要的。
这样看似温情，实则隔着距离的话语，无法打动她怠惰腐朽的内心。
父母根本不了解真正的她。他们安慰的是那个行为符合常理的，存在于想象中的“星野”，一个持续努力学习却一直无法获得好成绩的学生。
如果可以，她甚至希望他们言简意赅地直指她最阴暗最隐秘的内心。
“每天晚上你究竟在干些什么？学习效率很低吧？你的努力都是装出来给我们看的吗，如果是这样，那还不如不要去学校了！”
类似这样，一点也不温柔解意的话，她想听到。
在学校里也是一样，从一开始的有人能一起吃饭、一起回家到后来的独来独往。
开始玩游戏之后，她的兴趣日渐转移到那个虚幻的二次元世界中，与昔日好朋友的共同话题变少了。
“我昨天，咳，双休日不小心搜到了一个单机游戏，然后试玩了一下，感觉很有意思。里面的男主角一个人脚踏十几条船，由玩家来操作他的每日作息、安排行程表来使他不翻船。里面有一个女主角是个病娇，查岗查得超级严，还偷偷跟踪男主的另一个高中生女友……”